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Gary Trujillo's avatar

I haven't read the book, but the review was well- written and entertaining. Bravo.

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Moravagine's avatar

It definitely would not help to have read The Human Stain because it is a terrible book, actually one of Roth's worst.

Thanks for this fairly even-handed review; I have two quibbles with it that maybe are just my own little pricklinesses of the same kind they observe. You complain about NY books, and resenting knowing the cultural differences between Greenpoint and Williamsburg (which is a funny line) and then insist books would be better to be set in more "interesting" places. But to set a book in any other place as well would require just the kind of intricate and intimate scene-setting about that place that you resent about NY novels. Personally even before I lived there, and certainly since, I have never resented NY settings. I also don't resent detailed LA settings, or San Francisco, or Glasgow, London, St. Petersburg, or Montreal (or D.C., clears throat). It isn't inherent to fiction that it have a localized sense of place but certain stories work best with that grounding, and certainly it can be great about rural places too (see Chris Offutt or, my God, Faulkner). I see comments like that and I a roll my eyes at the performative provincialism that wants to shout its credibility as repping for somewhere OTHER than the center. Please give Balzac's Lost Illusions a try and see if it clarifies why this stance is perfectly fruitful aesthetically but extremely tedious both on Substack and generally. You are a smart, thoughtful, and noninstitutional reader/reviewer and it sucks to see reflexive parochialism mar a review.

Secondarily, I note that you admit not reading much contemporary fiction but I gotta tell you, the "telling over showing" is real and standard and commonplace. It's valid if it works, it can weigh down when it doesn't. It is very European in some ways, except European writers are more subtle about it, or at least what it is doing. See Soldiers of Salamis by Javier Cercas or The Postcard by Anne Berest (admittedly also autofiction so somewhat aside of my point) for examples that to my mind, work, or see Paul Auster's Book of Illusions or Leviathan for an American albeit heavily indebted to Europeans who makes it work. Also recall Victorians like Dickens and Collins. Even our beloved PKD does it, albeit most obviously when he was working under a deadline and produced subpar work. I guess my peeve here isn't so much that you are "wrong" for noting this, as that the "show don't tell dynamic" is both highly cliche and not really all that relevant even when it was common, because it is the type of "rule" most honored in the breach.

I apologize; I'm writing fast because i have paying work to get back to, and i realize without rereading that this is a bit lecture-y. Please accept my sincere assurance that it was not so intended and my compliments for writing the review that prompted this; it's always a pleasure to read your thoughts on books. Sooner or later I will get back to Martian Time-Slip and update you on whether it has become unreadable to me as to you. Cheers.

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